Robots and computers

In the future, will almost certainly be many kind of robots and computers which is a significant role in people life in the world. We usually think that if it come into being , we can have more convenient life but, it is not neccessary. If it come into being, I think everywork will probably be done by robots and computer.Therefore, many of people will probably be indolence. Moreover they are likely to become a superintendent.Eventually,many people depend by them.
Therefore, the earth will probably die by them.

What do you want to improve this term?

I want to improve writing and vocablary.
because writing is the most important part in Unitec. If I fail the writing test, I am not allowed to go to Intermedite clss. I think vocablary is importent too.
because vocablary is the foundation of English .

Why am I learning English?

I want to be a veterinarian(VET) so I am going to go to the unitec.
It is my goal . because I lixe animals, I also have got some impormation about animals.
Therefore I am looking forword to going to unitec in New zealand.
I should study hard for my goal .
I want to help poor animals.